Caryl Mclaen: At this point in my mind, I said to myself, "don’t take coach's comments seriously, but instead use his comments to motivate me to practice and work to harder and prove to him that I am capable of making the team."that is where you need quotation marks because that,in the sentence is where you are speaking aloud....Show more
Nikki Sypult: Remove the comma after "mind" and yes, put quotation marks before don't (which should be capitalized) and after team. Another option would be to forgo the quotation marks and simply put everything from don't to team in italics (still capitalizing don't).
No comments:
Post a Comment